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Feedback Unit 2 (referring to Unit 1 material)

Blog review for Elderly females and physical body   The elements for this unit has been covered by your group. The heading and subheadings of this portion of the website are appropriate for the information that is being shared. There are enough pictures and videos to support the information in this section. The elements in this section are clear and easy to follow for the viewer. I did not see any grammatical errors in this section. I really like how you guys included pictures that covered different areas of the body explaining how each part changes during aging. One of your pictures lists body functions and compares each area so that we can understand how it is different in both women and men. This was a great picture because it allowed me to better retain the information because it was neatly organized. It is also easier for some individuals to have visuals instead of reading information in paragraph. For me it is so much easier to retain information if I have a picture to go wit...

Feedback Unit 2

I decided to review the Adulthood group’s website. The website is easy to follow and has great graphics to emphasize the information being shared. I also think this part of the website seems cohesive and can pass by as if it were only one author’s work, so great job on that! I do believe the paragraphs are a bit too long and some information can be simplified and/or shortened. I appreciate the hormones and menopause section, as it contains important and factual information that can be helpful for women and healthcare providers. I also liked that the videos are short in length and straight to the point. I would have liked to see some information in layman’s terms as the website is catered to women with all different kinds of educational backgrounds. Some sentences start with additional space such as the sentence in “science versus perseverance”. The sentence that starts with “women accounted for 20.4%...”. This is actually something I struggled with as my computer is old and on occasion...

Introduction

 Hello, My name is Marilyn Martinez and I reside in Mission, Texas (Southern tip of Texas). I graduated from Texas A&M University with my Bachelor's Degree in Recreation, Park, and Tourism Sciences and then went on to work as a Forensic Interviewer for a Children's Advocacy Center. As I was working, I decided to look into a different career and fell in love with occupational therapy! I graduated from the University of St. Augustine for Health Sciences in April of 2022 with my Master's in Occupational Therapy. Since graduating and obtaining my license, I have been working as an OT in an inpatient rehabilitation facility.  My favorite city is Granada, Spain. I had the privilege of studying abroad during my undergraduate journey and Granada was everything I expected and more. Upon graduating from the PPOTD program, my husband and I plan to visit Granada. One positive characteristic is my ability to be empathetic with my patients. It helps me meet my patients where they are...