Feedback Unit 2

I decided to review the Adulthood group’s website. The website is easy to follow and has great graphics to emphasize the information being shared. I also think this part of the website seems cohesive and can pass by as if it were only one author’s work, so great job on that! I do believe the paragraphs are a bit too long and some information can be simplified and/or shortened. I appreciate the hormones and menopause section, as it contains important and factual information that can be helpful for women and healthcare providers. I also liked that the videos are short in length and straight to the point. I would have liked to see some information in layman’s terms as the website is catered to women with all different kinds of educational backgrounds. Some sentences start with additional space such as the sentence in “science versus perseverance”. The sentence that starts with “women accounted for 20.4%...”. This is actually something I struggled with as my computer is old and on occasions, something called “sticky keys” turn on and create additional spaces when I’m typing. Overall, I think this group did a great job with the first section of the website for this population.