unit 4 feedback (unit 3)

 Hi Marilyn!

I found you and your groups page very informative. I had a little difficulty reading your first image (food safety), however, after zooming in I was able to do so; I would of probably placed that specific image underneath your subsection "Dietary Guidelines."The transition from your protective factors section to dietary guidelines was a little unclear since there was a nutrition video in the protective factors section.  The rest of the videos and pictures that were uploaded were easy to follow and understand. Some feedback would be to be consistent with having the full name of an acronym in parenthesis, for example, to be reader friendly for those with no or little healthcare background might not know what "SIDS" is. I did not come across any spelling errors on your page. Your writing was clear and concise, and easy to follow;  All the essential elements that were required for your page was presented. The videos and images assist with learning the information that was written. I enjoyed reading through your page because I used to be an outpatient pediatric occupational therapist; majority of my sessions was addressing feeding, sensory disorders which impacts physical activity, and educating child and caregiver(s). From personal experience, I observed majority of my children come in the clinic with fast food after school, and I'm not surprised by your statistic that 38.9 million children were overweight or obese. Also, SIDS is a Overall, I found you and your group's page educational!